■ Direction You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. Your response will be judged on the basis of The quality of writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and the relationship to the reading passage. Typically, an effective response will be 150 to 225 words. ■ Question Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on the points made in the reading
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▶ Topic : A teacher should assign homework to students everyday. |
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▶ Your Answer :
In this world
of controversy, the topic of whether a teacher should assign homework to
students everyday is a never-ending discussion. Some argue that it is better for
students to be given homework from teacher everyday. Indeed, students might
study harder if they always do homework from school. However, I would like to
strongly claim that a teacher should not assign homework to students everyday.
There are two reasons why.
First, students would feel bored with
studying. Even though studying a lot is good, it would worsen the attitude of
students if a teacher assigns too much homework. For example, it has a lot to
do with the certain statistics. (what statistics? be more specific) People tend to be tired of something if they
contacted with the thing often. (문장이 이상해요.) The feeling of a person declined very fast as
the administrator assigned the same thing to do. The students’ situation is
also the same. As the teacher assigns homework everyday, the interest toward studying
will decrease.
Secondly, students also have other work to
do. There are some tasks they should do from other place. For instance,
students nowadays are going to academy. They live in a quite busy life.
However, if a teacher always assigns (주어 동사 일치) homework to students, it would counteract
students and they do not have any time to finish other tasks. In my case, I had
a lot of homework from my academy and a teacher at school also assigned homework
everyday. It would give a considerable amount of stress to students. What a torture it
is!! (too casual한 sentence예요.)
In conclusion, I think that a teacher should
not assign homework to students everyday following these two reasons:
counteracting the attitude of students toward studying, (counteract라는 단어가 어색합니다. lowering the attitude나 reducing the students' interest가 더 자연스러울 것 같습니다. counteract는 어떤 effect를 상쇄시킬 때 주로 쓰는 단어입니다.) no time for doing other
tasks.
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점수: 22/30
두번째 paragraph에서 statistics랑 contact the thing 부분이 상당히 unclear합니다.
statistics라는 단어가 나왔는데도 아무런 data가 없는 것도 어색합니다.
그리고 주어 동사 일치가 잘 이루어지지 않고 있습니다. 3인칭 동사 쓰는거 꼭 기억해주세요.
수고하셨습니다. *^^*