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In the reading passage, there is ample support for the author’s claim that we can know that when, where and how dogs’ domestication started. However, the professor in the lecture gives several reasons as a rebuttal to the author’ point. First, the professor contends that it is difficult to believe that ancient people have tamed wolves as a hunting animal and the wolves became now dogs. Because as there is a difference between dog’s hunting style and wolf’s hunting style. Moreover, it is really hard to train wolves due to their aggressive characters. This casts doubt on the reading passage’s claim that ancient people started raising wolves and the wolves have evolved their intrinsic traits that are suitable for coexist to coexist with human being. Next, the professor insists that it is so doubtful that the domestication of dogs began since 16,000 years ago. Recently, the footprint of a dog walking with a young boy was discovered by archaeologists. Also, the relic indicates that it was at least 26.000 years old. This counters the reading passage’s assertion that recent dog’s DNA analysis represents that the earliest dog emerged when the first ancestor lived. Finally, the professor argues that it is not true that the first country that tried to domesticate the dogs was China and then spread all over the world. Because the domestication of dogs occurred in multiple areas and old fossils were found not only in China but also other many countries, such as Europe and Middle East. Futhermore, recent research indicates that they are came from four forefathers and the each ancestor has different country. This refutes the reading passage’s suggestion that the species tend to have the largest diversity in the area when the origin was appeared and it is fact that the China has most various species of dogs. Good: 24~30 점수: 27 통합형 에세이에 가장 적합한 에세이인 거 같습니다. 통합형 에세이에서 가장 크게 보는 것은 얼마나 적절하게 리딩과 리스닝을 비교하였냐 입니다. 지금 이 에세이는 이러한 부분에 있어서는 오류가 없는 거 같습니다. 각 바디의 이유에 대해 서로 다른 정보를 가진 구체적인 리딩과 리스닝을 통해서 잘 설명하고 있는 거 같습니다. 지적할 부분이 없는 통합형 에세이입니다. 수고많으셨습니다.
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