Advertisements are the waste of a company’s time and money.
Many companies spend time and money on advertising their goods in order to attract customers’ attention. Some people might say that it would be a waste for companies to concentrate on advertisements because of possibilities that they do not work. However, in my point of view, time and money that companies spend on advertisements is certainly valuable in the aspect of returning profits. In this essay, I will clearly show and develop two reasons to support my idea.
To begin with, time and money for advertisements have companies’ internal economic benefits in terms of promoting market demand effectively. It seems that companies waste huge money and time in advertising some goods. However, advertisements made by lots of money and time can generate customers’ favor more efficiently. Advertising specific products is effective way to persuade customers. The more advertisements spread, the more people purchase products. To disperse and engrave products’ information into customers, it is necessary for companies to spend time and money on advertisements. These companies’ efforts can finally bring large profits.
In addition, time and money spent on advertisements help society to have external economic advantages by promoting financial circulation. As companies spend much money and time on advertisements, other companies related with the advertisements can economically be affected. Since advertisement industry is very popular, economic effect would be huge. For example, whenever a company prepares special advertisements invested lots of money and time, professional company about advertisement can obtain commission, good chance to work. The professional company would need more people and offer many jobs. As increasing number of jobs people can get opportunity to work. Since the people who can work can purchase many products, the first company’s amount of sales would enhance. This positive economic effect can spread over other industries. Thus, company’s time and money on advertisements is not waste.
To summarize, I strongly believe that it is desirable for companies to spend time and money in order to gain profits. Companies do not avoid advertising cost to create better advertisement. Therefore, people cannot regard time and money for ads as just waste.
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