Which area(environment) would be good for children? Different people hold different ideas because people hasve their own educational philosophies. Although living in the countryside may provide valuable lesson from the nature, as far as I concerns, I believe living in the city would be better for children (to grow up) growing up as(because of/with (those ) following reasons.
If you live in the countryside, your children can be exposed in the nature more widely. Rural life is more peaceful and is able to have with bigger greenish playground which you can not have in the urban area. However, living in the countryside is very limited(brings lots of limitations/disadvantages). There are fewer people lived(living) , so your social network boundary would be very small. Your chlidren also have limited social relationship, only meeting people around your neighborhood. It is necessary for your children to have people from various cultures and backgrounds, because they play an important role for your children to have a dream what they are like to be.
meet people from various backgrounds>> widen prospective >>more opportunity to experience
lots of jobs....>> play an important role in their decision making process for thier future...
Furthemore, education in the city gives has higher quality( or City provides highly qualified education ... to your children. Typically schools in the city provide more qualifed education.(repeated sentence) It is no doubt that most of prestigous high schools are located in the big cities. In particular, many skillful teachers work for those kind of education institutes. Therefore your children can have qualifed education from them. Therefore, the qualified education system in cities could help children
to develop themselves more efficiently than in countrysides.
What's more, there are many opportunities to learn hobbies in the cities. Because people from various cultures live in the city, diverse cultural environnment is formed in the city. Learning musical instrument, marcial art, or computer skills is are easily practiced in the citie area. On the countrary, tt is difficult to learn these kind of learning in the countryside, and it costs a lot.
In brief, I beleive that living in the city would be better for education because를 앞으로 빼고 not only because children can meet various people to broad their horizen, but also because they can have higher education and opportunities for diverse hobbies.
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