■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic : After 20 years, people will be able to have more leisure time(free time) than now. Do you agree or disagree?
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1. mechanical development
various technologies. especially robots and computer -> telecommuting
ex) my uncle engineer for 30 years. only supervise the process in factroy
2. encourage to have more leisure time
increasing suicide rate -> modern people easily depressed .
one mean of sustainable admistrations company engourage
ex) A survey shows that graduate students set the first proriets
Most people consider the amount of leisure time when choosing their jobs because enjoying life is important as much as lucrative jobs. Meanwhile, some experts cautiously expect that there will be more leisure time in the future than now. I strongly agree with their suggestion because various technologies are rapidly developed and companies are encouraging employees to have more leisure time.
Most of all, scientists and engineers have been studying lots of state-of-the-art technologies, which will play much more roles in various industries. In fact, the amound of works that modern people are doing is far less compared to the past workload. Recently, the speed of tehnological developments are getting faster and faster. In this regard, Even telecommuting is in all rages today. Take my uncle's case to demonstrate this point. He has worked at the furniture factory for 30 years. In the past, he assembled furnitures in the workplace for about 9 hours a day. However since 3 years ago, he just supervises the whole process which is all proceed by robots. Although this convinence is partially due to his long working years, he would not even imagine those robots without rapid development of mechanical technologies.
On top of that, companies let their workers to have more leisure time. As modern society is getting complex, some people are having hard time caused by several personal problems. A survey that suicide rate increased drastically in the last 10 years reflects this social phenomenon. Thus many companies guarantee enough leisure time to their employees to relax, excersice and improve themselves as one of the sustainable admistration policies . According to the the recruiting researh institution, more than the quater of graduate students in Korea set the leisure time as their first priority when choosing their jobs. This trend illustrates that companies will give workers more personal time to attract many applicants.
To sum up, it is evident that people have more leisure time in the future thanks to technological deveopment and companies' encouragement. Therefore, we are required to spend the increasing leisure time in desirable ways. | |
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