Question: It is better to do one thing after another than to do multiple things at the same time.
In the modern world, it is very important for everyone to how to use their valuable time. So someone can say that it is better to do one thing after another because this can use time effectively. However, this is wrong. What I mean is that only concentrating on one thing is not a good idea, this is because this may decreases one’s morale, and also doing multiple things at the same time can get diverse results.
물론 서론은 길게 안쓰는 편이지만, 의미 해석이 잘 안되는것 같아요. 따라서 왜 그런 생각을 하는지 이유에 대해서 아주 간략하게라도 언급하는게 좋은 것 같아요
To start with, doing one thing can reduce one’s productivity. Someone may disagrees with this point of view because we can concentrate better during the that time. However, they may not they may not consider the workers’ emotional aspect. If someone conducts a task for a long time, although he can concentrate better, he gradually feels tedious. For example, when I studied Chinese, I had to master Chinese in 6 months. So in this 6 months, I didn’t do anything such as math , english or physics and only studied Chineses. Do you see I could concentrate on Chinese better? Of course no. At the first month, I learned Chinese with enthusiastic, studied over 300 words a day, and grammer and how to write the article and so on. However, I began to tire at the second month. So the rest of months, I couldn’t concentrate better and I failed my HSK test ( one of the Chinese tests). All of this is because doing on thing can devote better at the first time, but people can gradually decrease their morale to complete the task.
On the other hand, when we do multiple things at the same time, we can get many diverse results. Although this makes people tie their time and feel urgency, this urgency makes people take the tasks seriously and do better. Since they feel urgency, they have to do effective time allocation and try their best. To give a personal example, when I failed to study Chinese, I had to study other subjects such as math, english and physics. However, I didn’t know how to complete this subjects, doing one thing after another or doing multiple things. I decided the last one. And I effectively used time and finally get a good results.
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