> > 2010-03-05 10:06:41, '' 님이 쓰신 글입니다. ↓
■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
|
Topic : Schools should ask students to evaluate their teachers. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
| |
|
Every teachers in the school have different way to teaches and explain to student. Now days, it is debatable whether students should evaluate their teachers or not. Some people may say that, student should not judge teacher because student's favorite teachers are different from good teacher. However, from my point of view, it is good to have opportunity to evaluate teachers.
To begin with, the result of evaluation is good chance to know which way is better for students. Teaching is not only teacher's job(의미를 좀 더 정확히 쓸 필요가 있을 것 같습니다), teacher should understand that, how student follow what they teach, and absorb their class. Therefore, it is important that teachers know which way is good for students. So that teachers can change or try different way. Let's say there is horrible teacher and he doesn't know he is horrible at teaching. With out somebody's advice it is hard to fix the way how he teaches. But if school let student evaluate teachers, he will realize what he was horrible at, (어떤 의미로 쓰신건지요? 더 구체적으로 써주세요) and what teacher should fix for their classes. Thus, students have chance to judge teacher is good chance to notice teacher's problem and fix problems.
Moveover, knowing evaluation's result will inspire teachers. Even though teacher get bad result, they will try more to get the better grade next time. And if teachers get good grade they will encouraged from grade, and may have confident for their classes. Evaluation will stimulate both way. As a example of grade
Inspire people; I will take student's grade. Every end of the semester, each student get their grade and each student try harder for their grade, or try to keep their grade. It is similar to have grade of student and teacher, this example shows grade can be helpful to teachers too. In this sense, I can clearly say that student should regularly evaluate teacher. And teaches know their grade is helpful because grade may stimulate teacher.
All things considered, although people may hold a different position on this issue, I firmly agree that school should ask students to judge teachers because knowing teacher selves and the other people's opinion is helpful for next class. And grade stimulates teacher's passion. Traditionally, nobody try to judge teacher but student. However, it is time to consider evaluating teacher for better education.
| |
오늘은 그래도 많이 맞춘거 같네요 ^^ 나름 만족중이에요 ㅋㅋ
제가 문법을 잘 못해서 그러는데 문법좀 지적해 주세요 ;;
교재도 공부한적 없구 독학이라서 엉망일진 몰라두...잘부탁 합니다 ~~~
그리구 점수도 ~~~~~~~점수점수점수 ㅋㅋㅋ 점수
보는맛에 적어요 +ㅁ+~~~
다들 열공하세요 ^^ 그리구 항상 도와주시는 분들 정말 감사합니다 ^^
...수고하세요 ^^
잘 쓰셨는데 단어나 표현 부분들이 문어체보다 구어체에 가까운 표현이 많은 것 같아요~
이 부분만좀 수정하시면 좋을 것 같습니당..
제셍각엔.. 한 20점~23점 정도 나올 것 같아용