■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic : Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Businesses should do anything they can to make a profit. Use specific reasons and examples to support your position. | |
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The main purpose of businesses is to make a money. In the competitive society, businesses have to try to develop new items or invest more money on advertising to attract more people for more money. However, I do not believe that companies should do anything they can to make a profit because they have to consider the environmental problems and relationships with employees and they have some reposnsibilities for the society.
First of all, every field of business cannot avoid causing the environmental pollutions. Without natural resources, companies cannot make one single item. Also, druing the industrial process, companies emit enourmous amount of pollutants such as green house gases. Although recently the inventions of technologies lead more ecological ways in the industries, these methods are still expensive. Due to the mometary burden, companies may do not want to take these technologies and choose to waste the pollutants to make more profit. However, the environmental destruction reached the life-threatening level and businesses should try to reduce the amount of wastes and the pollutants even though they have to give up some amount of their profit.
Another aspect that companies have to consider is the relationship with their employees. One of the methods that many companies reduce the cost is to pare the salaries of employees or several altenatives for employee's wellfare. However, it is more important to keep the intimate and solid relationship with workers than to make more profit by dwindling costs associated with employment. This is because employees are one of the most significant assets of companies and the good relationship between companies and workers can develop the business.
Also, companies have to take some reponsibilities for the society rather than just try to make as much money as possible. Many large companies in Korea, provide various programs for the society. For example, SK energy corporation, one of the biggest companies in Korea, formed a large park and provided it for the local society. Actually, this activity is opposite to the main purpose of the business, to make a profit. However, more companies are realizing that it is their important responsibility to develop the society as well as their own businesses even though they have to take the financial burden.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that businesses should not do everything to make a profit because they have to consider the environment as well as the relationship with employees and also they have responsibilities to develop the society. | |
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