A number of grduated students consider to enter the company.(a number of students consider to work for companies after their graduation 이 더 낫지 않을까요) actually, the problem which are enterng the company is rised(risen to) the hot-issue. ?? most of students could try to get a specification, so-called spec, the reason entering the company is providing good working place, the international corperation, such like Samsung, is paying the high salary to thier employee and empolyee would be able to get a outstanding career for field of job.
according to former statement, however, due to an extensive demanding, it is hard to enter the large company. therefore it may be alternatively direction that people would apply to small enterprise.
first of all, large company is making hard working, for instance, Smsung as the famous international corporation is also famous by hard working, general time of leaving thier work is between 9 - 12, even though some case is working in weekend. contrastly small company staff is supported sufficient leisure time, it is mean which get a more opportunity of self-devoloping, in my case, i have wanted to enter the small company and if i will join the company, i would expect to enter the graduate school for learning business economics. because i wish both getting much of money and doing what i want, it is desirale that it would apply the small company.
also, in small company, there is not preisely divide department's bounderay, so you could easy to learn a manifold business practice, it is helping thier career and ability of working, most of person who are woking at small company want to get another job which have better condition of woking place such as paying high salary and enough time for rest. by working small company, thier career and ability of business practice would be recongnized another job.
in conclusion, nowdays, economical state are more and more badly, also supplying about oppotunity of job is lower than before, therefore it is not easy to get a job, however, there are many excellent small company, if you are turning your sight about the job, the small company would be alternatively direction of your method.
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