■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic : Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? One should never judge a person by external appearances. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. | |
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No one looks exactly the same. Everybody is unique and different in their own ways; whether that be physical or mental. Considering this fact, one’s appearance should not matter when judging their value. Numerous people have insides that are the opposite from their outsides. External appearances have nothing to do with peoples’ personalities. Therefore; one should never judge a person by their physical appearance.
Humans often judge one’s quality by their physical features even before they actually get to meet the person. Because of this, myriads have been misunderstood. Not all people have the same interiors as their exterior appearances. A coconut would be a reasonable example: A coconut has grotesque characteristics, hairy and rough. But its inside is remarkably sweet and honeyed. Like this, not all people are what they seem to be.
The outside appearance of a person does not relate to their personality. People are born with their physical features from their mothers’ wombs; their interior beliefs and thoughts could be whole different. A person could seem grouchy and bad-tempered, but once you get to know him, he could be actually pleasing and supple. Michelle Goldstein, a good friend of mine, is also a person with the examples’ qualities. She’s incredibly delightful once she introduces herself, but she can seem cold and sulky because of her piercing eyes.
One should never decide on a person by their physical appearance. Not all people are like how they seem, and external features have nothing in common with one’s personality. Everybody is fairly diverse from others, and people should respect it, not criticize it.
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