In korea, (every는 단수예요)every most of students have their vacation for about 4 months an year. Some people object to this system arguing that students should take more classes without any stoppage for their academical acheivement. However I strongly disagree with them because students can do extra-curricular activities during the vacation and can focus on their studying after the break.
Most of all, long vacation is necessary for students (to involve in/particiate in) other activities. The break terms are not the time for just being lazy. Many students do lots of other activities like volunteering programs, sports and part-time jobs which they could not be are not able to do during the school lives.(terms/semesters) Seeing the cases of the successful people, it is evident that not only academical achievement is essential to for the successful life but also other experiences are needed. For exampel, my uncle who is a CEO in a great company in Korea did lots of part-time works when he was young. If there was not a school break, it would have been a very hard time to the young kids.(it would have been difficult for him to do outside activities) He studied very hard in at school during the semesters and built a wide range of personal experiences experienced a lot during the vacation. He told me that that was the conerstone to his success. (He told me that those valuable experience from outside of school laid the conerstone of his successful business life.)
On top of that, students can concentrate more on their studying after a break. 11 months of classes would be very tough to the young kids. In general, most students can not fully focus on their classes even for an hour. That is why there is 5 or 10 minutes of break time between classes. Likewise, they need a long break time between semesters for better efficiency. A survey shows that more than 80 percent of students think that they need more vacation. (80%의 학생들이 더 긴 방학을 필요로한다라는
survey 보다.. 뭐 휴식시간을 가지면 진짜로 공부의 능률이 더 오른다더라..집중력이 높아진다더라..
이런 results 가 이 문단에서 필요하지 않을까..싶은데요) In this sense, if the time for studying in school extended, many students would hate to study. Therefore, schools should give their students time for relaxing.
To summerize, students should not take classes for most time of an year for their opportunities for other activities and efficient studying. Schools should not underestimate these advantages of the vacation.
As we all know, school studying doesn't guarantee students their success. Students should learn
from a wide range of knowledge or experience from all fields of the world and they deserve the
opportunities...School breaks allow students to grab those valuable opportunites to experince as well
as eficient studying. Therefore vacation is necessary for students as well as for the brighter society/community....뭐 대충...이런식으로쓰면되려나.....ㅋㅋㅋ 모르겟쪄용 |