■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic : Young people enjoy life more than other people do. | |
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Those who consider being stable enjoyable might say that the youth cannot enjoy life more. However, I think that young people live a more enjoyable life than the older do. There are two major reasons : being uncertain and having enthusiasm.
First, the uncertainty the young have helps them to lead a life more excitingly. Some older people also cannot be sure about their future. However, there is a huge difference between a young person who is uncertain about their future and an old person who is so. The latter is totally a loser in life. The youth can not only experience many different jobs but also be very excited to expect who their spouse will be. As society is getting more complex, competition is getting fiercer. Therefore, the way of spending a mid-life has changed. It was to enjoy their hobbies and trips, but now it is to compete to survive in this dog-eat-dog world with the younger.
Moreover, as fas as having passion is concerned, older people live a less pleasant life. Although the older might have relatively enough money to enjoy something, you may not deny that money is not everythng. From enjoying various hobbies to traveling to far-away places, there is nothing more useful than having passion and energy. I felt this when I tried a back-packing trip in North America. On my way from Vermont to Quebec, I hitchhiked and met various people. I was enthusiastic in experiencing something, but if I had had enough money and no passion, I would have rented and driven a car. Then, All I could remember about the trip would be many receipts and useless souvenirs.
In summary, I agree with the statement that young people enjoy their life more because they can expect the unexpected later in life and have enthusiasm and energy for everything.
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