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Since
the rapid technology development, a society has confronted with lots of traffic
that brings about a plethora of obstacles that hinder a convenience toward a
work. In order to resolve the condition of rush hour circumstances, it is
widely concerned whether one, who drives car should be charged a fee to relieve
the rush hour traffic jam. Although many opinions can be manifested, I contend
that one should be charged a finance when driving during working hours for the
following subsequent reasons. for the following two subsequent reasons.
To begin with, by cost will
definitely reduce a traffic jam it will reduce the traffic jam. During rush hour, as there are insurmountable
number of cars present on high way on the high way, people, who live in competitive world, have
to go fast to exceed others. However, with so many cars mingling, it hinders
the way people live the way of people live is greatly hindered. When government imposes a fee to those who drive cars on
high way during working hours, the traffic jam would be diminished (계속해서 똑같은 표현이 반복적으로 나타나는 거 같습니다). As people
are concerned with higher governance cost, less drivers are willing to take the
road to go to work will drive their cars. For example, recently Korean government imposed ten
thousand one cost for those who drive during the rush hour. As the cost itself
is too expensive, drivers ponder not to take the cars to the road way, in stead
they take the public transportation to take alternative method to go to work.
As less cars are driven, the traffic worries of Korea has dramatically reduced have drastically been reduced (worries는 복수 주어 입니다) showing the effective way of decreasing the rush hour traffic jam.
Furthermore, rush hour congestion
cost will reduce the air contamination. Nowadays, air pollution has been a
critical issue globally as the higher air contamination the more negative
impact on general pollution. Recent years, in particular in Korea, with the
influx of fine dust from China has seriously aggravated Recent years a lot of find dust from China came to Korea. In order to reduce
such harmful dust, one way is to reduce the rush hour traffic. When the fee is
given, people will take participate in alternative way such as public
transportation turn to alternative way to correspond the policy (동사가 두 개 입니다). When people take more transportation, the overall pollution
will be waned. When the pollution is decreased, government can efficiently lead
a country in other mediums to increase the overall condition of a society. With
the help of the cost on rush hour drivers, a society will confront with clean
air that enhances overall health of individual human being.
To conclude, it is often believed
that the charge should not be perceived as there are alternative way to reduce
the traffic jam. However, with the issue of decreasing in traffic congestion
and decline of air pollution, it is more beneficial for government to conduct
traffic cost to progress a country. If government wants to progress, the fee is
a must way to make society a better place.
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