Conventionally, the environment has truly been a minor issue of the government's concern. Under such circumstance, our invaluable environment has been tremendously destroyed for a long time. Some people might think that it is necessary evil(immorality) to ruin our nature to enhance our lives. From my standpoint, however, the environment must be the most important issue for us especially the government to concern about. As many places and species have suffered from the name of development. More importantly, people are also benefiting from developing environmental friendly alternative energy.(순서가 the alternative environmentfriendly energy)
In modern society, needless to say, our lives have been dramatically improved by highly advanced technology. Nevertheless, it made it nearly impossible for our nature to recover(recover what?- desctruction이라던가) naturally. For example, we are consistently not only losing a priceless treasure:(such as) the Amazon rainforest but also experiencing melting of Glaciers. These two phenomena are critical signs or warning which makes impossible for our next generations to survive with nature. Moreover, many species were already disappeared and more and more species are in danger. According to B.B.C documentary, polar bears have been losing their territories and provisions and they are now in danger(endangered). Through history, we are undoubtedly benefiting from nature giving us everything(everything말고 다른더좋은단어 생각해보시구요_). Simply, when we need to build a house, we routinely saw trees down and when we are suffered by hunger, we always hunt animals. This is time we have to admit importance of our nature and concern it most significantly.
Needless to say, many scientists are continuously saying that if we harness alternative energies which are environmental friendly, we can take advantage of them more than countless years as well as promise our descendant to have clean environment. Even though, employing alternative energy is required requires highly developed technology and a great amount of time-consuming, it is meaningful not only for us but also for our nature. For example, we are having a tough time with expensive unsustainable energies which is are also harmful for our nature as well as for ourselves. Also more importantly, we are not simply able to make a conclusion how long we can use them. Hence, this must be the priority issue for the government' concern.
Through history, in England, because of expensive price of plants, people used coal for energy source instead. As a result, England has been infamous for air pollution albeit it, the Industrial Revolution, happened nearly two hundred years ago.(don't get this one) From my viewpoint, thus, it is reasonable time that environment issue must be a the first concern from the government' policy. (for the government)
gud essay ^^ isn't it too long for toefl though? ^^
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