topic을 뒷받침하는 2개의 example을 적으려는데, 머릿속으로 떠오르는 건 너무 general 한 내용이네요.
body paragraph에 들어가야 할 내용입니다.
독학이라 물어볼 데도 없고 해서 여기 올립니다.
다음은 Princeton review에 나오는 연습문제 입니다.
Some schools require first-year students to take the same courses, whereas other schools allow students to select the classes they want. Which policy do you think is better for first year students and why?
Example #1: First-year students need to complete some basic studies essential to follow various courses.
Why?
1. There are common basic study skills, such as essay writings and basic mathematics.
2. These basic studies are very important to keep up with some college courses.
Example #2: Without regulation, some first-year students tend to lead a dissolute life.
Why?
1. After spending a long time studying in high schools, they like to feel freedom in university.
2. Many of students got a F grade most likely in the first-year.