■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic :To have a successful life in school, peers are more influential than parents.
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Most people spend a big portion of their life at school when they are young. And the time spending together with peers becomes bigger and bigger as one moves to the next stage of school. Spending a lot of time with peers doesn't mean, simply to say, it has a great role to another's successful life, however, I strongly believe that peers have the most important affect to another's life as an old say goes like "Birds of a feather flock together".
To begin with, as in the most emotionally sensitive stage of adolescence, youngsters do not necessarily talk everything about their problems with their parents all the time. Rather, they desire to share their problems with the best friends and seek an answer out of them. In such cases, no matter how good one's parents do their best to deal with their children's matters, it is just out of their reaches. Only the good friends can suggest their friends' a piece of good advice in stead of grownups.
Furthermore, when it comes to selection of peers, one can have his/her own choice, while no one can be born choosing his/her parents. One who wants to study hard in school may well hang out with good students at school. And they can organize a group of people to study together. Oppositely, some students who wish to play some good time drinking beear and smoking would pick such friends as one can guess. So it is needless to say that peers have more power to affect another one's life compared to limited relations with their parents.
To conclude, it is of no use denying that having nice parents would be critical for one's successful life. Also, we cannot ignore the more outweighing power of peers' influence not only for being willingly to become a friend's consultant in adolescence, but also for one's right to choose what kind of peer to hang out with. For these reasons, I think peers are more important to live a successful life despite of all that influence of nice parents. | |
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