■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic : 만족하는 직업 VS 돈 많이 버는 직업 | |
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Some people say that having a high salary is better than being happy with the job. However I am against the idea for two reasons. First, people could improve their level of life style when they are satisfied with a job. In addition, usually people who are satisfied with their job have more chance to promote their job position.
First, having a satisfying position guarantee the more successful life. For sure, money is important to today’s people. However, they usually can not change their job easily and most of their time is spent at their workplace. Therefore, people could not enjoy their life provided they are unhappy at their job. To illustrate my point, my cousin used to work in the large corporation which gave their employees a lot of money, but he hated to work at the company. He was getting more and more fractious. As a result, he was forced to leave. And he has lived a happily life now since he got a job that he want. In this regard, it is important for people to have a satisfied job. Moreover, being satisfied with a job enable people to promote their position. Of course, there are many people who achieve promotion without satisfaction. However, people who have satisfying job are likely to get a promotion. According to a recent research conducted by Korean National Research Center reveals that more 90 percents people who are in the high position at the company showed that a positive attitude toward their job. This means that people need to have satisfying job to get a high position. In this sense, having a satisfying job gives people more chance to promotion.
In conclusion, people should have a satisfying position for two reasons. People can have better chance to improve their standard of living. Furthermore, a satisfying position makes it possible for people to get a better chance to promotion.
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