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■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic : Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People should sometimes do things that they do not enjoy doing. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
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It is not an easy question whether people should sometimes do things what they do not enjoy doing. I have two different points of view about this question; first one is about social life and second is about personal life. I firmly believe that people should follow the social system even though they do not enjoy doing so and personally they have a right to do what they want to do.
To begin with, people should follow the rules even though they do not enjoy them.It is undeniable that human beings are social animals and to maintain the society, people have been making legal and security systems and have controlled human behaviors. Sometimes personal desires are conflicted to the social requirements or limitations. For example, smokers want to smoke wherever and whenever they want. However, it is prohibited in Korea to smoke inside buildings or in public spaces including parks. In this case, they should go to smoking zones even though it is annoying and they do not like to do. Another example is traffic lights. People should follow the traffic rules when driving. Sometimes they want to neglect the traffic lights or to speed over the limits to go faster. However it is important to follow the rule for their own and other people's safety. Like this, sometimes people should do what they do not enjoy doing and should not do what they enjoy doing for society.
On the contrary, in personal life, this is not true. I believe that people should do what they enjoy doing. Different people have different kinds of goals in their life. Some people do enjoy their present life and do not spend must time on preparing their future. It is obvious this kind of people are enjoying the life. Others endure the difficulties for their future and it seems like that they do what they do not enjoy. However I still speculate they do enjoy their life indeed and for them the important thing is not the present pleasure but the perspective success. I do not think enjoying something means hedonism but means willingness for doing something.
On conclusion, I think it is considerable that people are living two different life, social life and personal life. As a social animal, people should follow the legal systems even though they do not want to do. As a person, people should do what they want to and enjoy do.
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