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advertising helps us enhance our quality of life by informing us of new products.
When we turn on the TV, there are a flood of advertisements. Some people might think that the advertisement is useful in that they shows some information and fun. However, I firmly believe that the advertisement is just fee for the qualified TV program or news paper articles. The only purpose of advertisement is that attracting potential consumers by defeating ways.
From my perspective, the informations showed in advertisement is somewhat exeggerated. This is because that the aim of ads is to sell the product as possible as possible. Of course, I know the good aspect of the ads, because the company that produce have the most important and useful point of the new product, they shows us the new technique and the method of using it. However, I have some doubt that the ads is the best way for getting a knowledge of the new product. As most advertisement has some limited amount of time and paper, the information in the ads are also limited. Moreover, the seller did not want to show the flaw or the weak point of the product, they want to inform and attract us and they pay for ads company for the public realtions who did not be well-known about the product. I know the aim of the ads company is only attracting many buyers for the raise of the company's benefit. Consequently, the function of the ad as a informer is restrained.
Above all, when most of the people need to buy some new product that is often advertised on the TV or paper, they usually listen to the friend's counsel who has been use the product. because they tell us the really useful and vivid information about the product. as for me, I really like to watch some TV show programs and documentary programs and really thank for the companies who support making such a informative and fun and refreshing program. However, sorry for the companies that make advertisements, I have not followed the persuation of the advertisements. I did not focus on the advertisement because it is quite often repeated. Eventhough some advertisements are so attractive because of using the famous movie star or sport star players and humorous story. It is just for fun, not persuasive or useful. so I think that ad has not an important role in purchasing products.
when regarding all the reason I explained, advertising is not honest informer and people do not believe what was advertised. so the opinion that advertising enhance our quality of life is somewhat myopic.