■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic :teachers' pay should depend on how successfully their students learn. | |
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Compared with the past, now, it is definitely important for students to enter good universities because the job is affected by specific university in Korea in these day. Therefore, students should have to study hard and efficiently. In order for that to happen, the schools should have some teachers whose skill is excellent for students to study. At this point, there is the most important thing, the so-called "motivation." As a result, teachers' pay should depend on how successfully their students learn, but as a bonus system, not as an increase I basic pay. There are reasonable reasons why I think so.
Firstly, schools can improve teachers' incentive of learning by introducing bonus system. Needless to say, the impact of bonus system is enormous than we expected in the aspect of academic performance. The system benefits not only teachers in schools but also some those in private teaching institutes. For example, in the private teaching institutes, teachers are properly rewarded for their's effort. The effort is just the number of students in their class. The number of students can effect the amount of bonus, with which, teachers teach hard their students to learn efficiently and to maintain their students as well. If this system applies schools, without any question, the teachers also teach hard their students for their reward. In any situation, it is necessary for some one to do eagerly.
Secondly, the impact of the system of bonus also improve the schools cognition. By using the system, the teachers teach and control efficiently their students, improving the academic achievement, and then the school's cognition ascends as well. To illustrate, most student's parents want their students to enter high level school that has good recognition, which makes schools compete each other. In order to win in these situations, school needs to have eager teachers and makes useful motivation for their teachers. At this point, the most effective thing is a financial reward. The financial reward can improve teachers's motivation, and the students can learn easily and efficiently, and finally good academic performance appears and palys a major role in schools' cognition.
To sum up, I firmly agree with the idea that teachers' pay should depend on good academic achievement. Indeed, teachers who have wonderful ability to teach students become eligible for awards and honor, and then it results in giving motivation for teachers and high level school's cognition. This is that killing two birds with one stone. | |
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