■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic : Awards and prizes are given for excellence in various fields. Do these awards and prizes serve a useful purpose? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. | |
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Some people think that it is not necessary that awards and prizes mean comparison among people who strive to acheive the same goal. This is because one winner makes others loosers. On the other hand, others believe that awards and prizes can play the useful role in competitive society. I strongly agree with the latter with some reasons to support this assertation.
First of all, awards and prizes provide someone who is the best in any field pride and reputation. To achieve the result which is affordable to receive awards and prizes, he or she has invested more time and efforts than others have done. As a compensation for the efforts, awards and prizes can be endowed so that he or she has pride about his or her acheivements. To him or her, it must be not only personal honor but a memorable event in his or her life.
Secondly, awards and prizes encourage people who work in the field to make better result. When people have the goal or dream in their tasks, they tend to work more hardly and positively. For example, sports mans who plan to participate the Olympic game have the same goal in that they hope to win the gold medal. If they do not have the goal towards a prize, the gold medal, they would not practice exercises doing the best.
Finally, it is effective to inform the field in the world as well as to improve it through awards and prizes. There are many unknowed fields. 10 years ago, most Korean did not know the golf. It had been known as one of the expensive and luxury sports. However, Korean witnessed that Seri park, one of Korean golf players, was awarded at the LPGA as winners. That event became a chance to announce the goal to Korean, and now golf has become the popular sport in Korea.
In conclusion, when it comes to reputation and pride of winner, encourgement for people who work in the field, and introduction and improvement of the field, I think that awards and prizes play the important role. | |
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