Those who consider the beauty the key to happy life might say that it is nature and appropriate for us to spend most of the time in decorating ourselves and shopping beautiful clothes. However I think that taking too much time for fashion and appearance is just worthless. there are two major reasons: Firstly the beauty is not an important part for succuss in our life. Secondly the appearance is not the only thing that could express one's nature.(?)
Foremostly, ability and professional skill help us to find a nice job and to overcome hardships in our life. Some people might think that wearing a charming clothes and making themselves seemed more beautiful could be helpful to find a job, however but what the company matters is not the appearance,(? no comma) but the capability like speaking foreign languages, (no comma)or getting a good score at college as and so on. As society is getting more complicated, competition is getting more fierce,(The more complicated a society is, the more fierce competition is.) Therefore, the role of education has changed; in the past, it was people needed to learn some common knowledge and elementary things, but now it is they are required to study to become more professional person people in order to get a job. By improving our ability and learning specific knowledge, we could not only be more professional but also can find a desirable work. Thus as and ? the aspect of success in our career, we have to take our time to learn, study the specific, not to read fashion magazine or buy knew perfume. (sentence structure; long and complicated... capitalization)
As far as expressing characteristics is concerned we should take important about the inside of heart. Although appearance can determine the fist impression of people, However in a the long run the nature and character must be revealed to people; therefore, we have to take care of our speaking and behavior.(sentence structure-incorrect) For example I have a friend who is very ugly and can not wear the clothes which appropriate to him. The first impression of him was very bad. I thought he is a poor and can not do anything, but eventually I find that he is a very kind person, also works as a SAMSUNG company's researcher, and having learned a lot of fields also with a variety of knowledge.
In summary I agree with the statement in the topic that people spend too much time for becoming more beautiful. it is because skill or ability is more important part when it comes to finding a job, and the inside of heart is the real characterictic of us |