■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic : To have a successful life in school, peers are more influential than parents. | |
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As the saying goes, "Blood is thicker than water.", parents play the most significant role in contributing to their children in school life. However, in my opinion, peers are more important role in having a successful life in school for the two reasons: to seek advice easly due to spending a lot of time and the peer pressure.
To begin with, young adults can get advice from peers who spend a enormous amount of time. It is obvious that stuents spend their almost time with friends in school and they have a mutual understanding, interaction, and trust. Therefore, students depend on peers for advice on school realate problems. For example, when I was a high school stduent, I became have many friends by spending most of the time in school. Naturally, I used to seek for advice from friends or take it when I have a school realted problems such as what clubs to join, what classes to take, and what major to chose. Thus, I was relient on my peers' opinion not parents' one.
In addition, the peer presure is a key factor in successful life in school. It is common that young adult in adolescence want to recognize to each other. Whether it was a academic preformanc or extracuricular activities, peer presure has a positive effect on students. According to the Education of Korea in 2007, a group A is composed of students with much popularity and group B is made up of students isolated. As a result, while the former showed higher academic performance, taking leadership position, and satisfaction of school life, the latter presented tiresome and feeling of unfair. This implies that peer pressure through interaction with friends leads to successful life in school.
In brief, peers' role can not underestimated because peers offer effective advice and peer presure provides beneficial effects. All in all, these merit seems for many parents to have their young adults spend time with peers.
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