■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Letting a friend make a mistake is better than saying or doing something that might destroy the friendship. | |
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Sometimes we do feel embarrassed and don’t know what to do when our friends make a little of mistakes even though they don’t mean to do. In some cases, people believe that it is better for them to give some advice to make friends feel the same as them when friends do have a fault, but I don’t think it is going to work for everyone somewhat. There are two reasons why I don’t agree with it.
First, some friends never listen to what we want to say as they don’t want to be interrupted and corrected by the others, which is to say, they do have their way to live. Also, sometimes those trials of correcting or interrupting friends result in collapse of relationship between friends, although we still want to keep this relationship for ever.
Second, it is necessary that people should realize their mistakes by themselves even if it might have a serious affect on the others and happen over and over again. We do know about “Trial and error.” Probably, these words is not accurately related to this kind of matter, but just think about that if friends of us make a mistake and after correcting their mistakes it seems okay that they will not make any mistakes more. The problem is if people don’t correct their mistakes, those mistakes would probably happen again. Thus, they have to correct it by themselves with lots of trial and error.
In conclusion, people are worried about how they should react when their friends make a mistake, but it is very clear that they just let friends do whatever they want to. Then, they realize they should not do the same thing after the experience, so it is absolutely important to make friends realize their own mistakes by themselves.
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