■ Direction You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. Your response will be judged on the basis of The quality of writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and the relationship to the reading passage. Typically, an effective response will be 150 to 225 words. ■ Question Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on the points made in the reading
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▶ Your Answer :
In this lecture, the speaker claims the statement that the hammerhead shark’s unique shape is advantageous is unclear. This opposes the reading’s assertion that their flat head has specific merits.
First, the speaker maintains that their head does (주어 동사 불일치) not strengthen their vision. They are able to know the depth of the prey only when they are distant objects. Also, their eyes have drawbacks with blind spot so they can catch only front obstacles. This counters the reading’s clam that they can see 360 degrees and the depth of their prey with their eyes.
Second, the speaker argues that the shark’s sense of smell is regular not special compared to other types of sharks. While it is revealed that Great White sharks have ability to detect blood, there are no study that prove the hammerhead sharks have better sense of smell than others. This casts doubt on the reading’s claim that they have better sense of smell because of shape of head.
Lastly, the speaker points out it is not true that the hammerhead sharks can turn fast with their thin head. Through video tapes, scientists found that the sharks have more (비교급) flexible backbones than others. It is the real reason that they can move quickly. This rebuts the reading’s claim that their unique head form makes (주어 동사 불일치) them turn swiftly than others. |
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1. 각 문단 시작 전에 tab 버튼 눌러서 들여쓰기 해주세요.
2. introduction의 분량을 3문장 이상으로 늘려주세요.
3. reading and listening의 비율이 너무 listening쪽으로만 치우쳐져 있습니다.
비율은 5:5, 적어도 6:4 정도는 되어야 합니다.
이는 리딩에 대한 디테일 부족으로 이어지며, 분량 부족, 추가 설명 실패 등으로 이어질 수 있으니
리딩에서도 evidence를 많이 찾아서 써주시면 좋을 것 같습니다.
수고하셨습니다. *^^*