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In this lecture, the speaker argues that the solutions to the emerald ash borer problem are not viable. This counters the reading’s claim that there are several solutions to handle it.
First, the speaker points out that removing trees are not effective. This is because the detective symptoms appear in 1 to 2 years later and then, they must spread to adjacent trees. Also, if the affected trees are found, it is possible only in urban. In forest, there are too many trees and cannot deal with them individually. This opposes the reading’s claim that identifying and removing affected trees are easy.
Second, the speaker maintains that using chemical treatment can be problematic. The application would result ground water contamination and not work at trees that have too many larvae. This casts doubt on the reading’s claim that the chemical treatment would stop the adult insects laying their eggs by kill them.
Lastly, the speaker contends that there are numerous issues to use wasps. The wasps survive only in cold winter region unlikely this insects. Also, it could make unintended consequence like killing other types of insects. This rebuts the reading’s claim that the biological pest control with wasps can be effective to eliminate bores.
점수: 22 통합형 에세이에서 가장 중요한 부분을 차지하는 것은 한 주제에 대하여서 서로 다른 정보를 가지고 있는 리딩과 리스닝이 어떻게 비교하고 반박을 하는 것인지를 보는 것 입니다. 지금 이 에세이 같은 경우에 있어서는 리딩에 대한 부분을 각 단락에서 한 문장으로만 서술하였는데. 한 문장으로만 서술하는 것이 아니라 리스닝을 좀 더 반박할 수 있는 부분들을 더 서술하시길 바랍니다. 수고많으셨습니다.
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