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The reading passage asserts that the uses of waver-energy facilities or wave farms will increase in the future because of its various advantages. However, the lecturer brings up several points that contradict the author’s argument.
First, the speaker argues that waver farms are not reliable generators of power. This is supported by the fact that the The (this is supported by the fact는 적절하지 않는 표현 입니다) disruption in power generator often takes place because the generators are installed in the harsh environment such as coastal areas and causes new technology to be used causing the usage of new technologies. Thus, the converter malfunctions which is responsible for the fluctuation of the amount of energy produced. This counters the reading passage’s argument that wave farms are credible energy source as waves are constant throughout all seasons.
Second, according to the lecture, wave-energy facilities are harmful to the environment. This is because the The equipment is consisted of chemical component. Chemical lubricant is used to make turbines move. When this harmful chemical is leaked out, it can have an adverse effect on marine organisms. This casts doubt on the reading’s claim that wave farms are environmentally friendly, since it does not emit harmful gases or contain fuels that can be assimilated into the ocean.
The final point made by the lecture is that wave farms have a negative impact on the natural beauty. The reason is that the generators have bright colors to be easily seen by shipping boats. Also, those are located near the beach, which leads tourists to see them with ease. This refutes the author’s point that wave-energy facilities do not have a harmful aesthetic effect on the scenery around it because it is small and located in less conspicuous areas.
점수: 22 리딩에 대한 정보가 많이 부족한 통합형 에세이입니다. 통합형 에세이에서 가장 중요한 부분을 차지하는 것 중에 하나는 한 주제에 대하여서 서로 다른 정보를 가지고 있는 리딩과 리스닝이 어떻게 비교하고 반박을 하는 것인지를 보는 것 입니다. 지금 이 에세이 같은 경우에 있어서는 리딩에 대한 부분이 각 단락에서 한 문장으로만 서술하였습니다. 한 문장으로 끝내는 것 보다는 리스닝을 좀 더 반박할 수 있는 부분들을 더 서술하시길 바랍니다. 수고많으셨습니다. |