▶ Your Answer:
Some people might say that young people nowadays tend to independent
from their parents than before. However, in my opinion, contemporarily young
people are more dependent on their parents to the past.
First
of all, young people need their parents’ aid to success in the competitive
society. To survive in this world of endless competition, the young ought to get
help from their parents in a way of monetary aids. In Korea, most of people
agreed that to get into renowned university, students have to be taught in
private academies or by tutors. It means that parents have to spend a lot of money
for their children education. Everyone is aware that success without parents’
help in this competitive society is like a camel passing through the eye of
needle nowadays, even if a person is very talented, without help from their
parents, one cannot succeed on his own field. For example, a friend of mine was
very talented in violin. He even finished basic skill of violin at 6-years-old.
However, my friend’s family was not wealthy enough to afford a good tutor for
his violin lesson. Unfortunately, he had to give up his dream to become a great
violinist.
Second,
separating from parents cost a lot of money for housing. As the cost of house
has raised rapidly, many people live with their parents rather than living
alone. In Korea, house payment is so expensive to afford for young people. They
need to save money by living with their parents before they get married.
Supposed that you have not enough money to separate from your family, would it
possible to live alone with increasing debts? The answer would be “no”. For
instance, I wanted to live university dormitory since I got to university for 2
hours and I wanted to live apart from my parents as I become an adult. However,
cost of dormitory is so expensive that I cannot afford this cost by myself. If I
had had enough money to pay school dormitory, I would have lived in school
dormitory separated from my family.
To
sum up, young people today need parents’ help for succeed in the society. Moreover,
they do not have enough money to pay house rent payment. In this regard I
believe that the young are not as much independent as past.
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