▶ Your Answer :
With
a development of modern technology, the way students learn has been changed for
a few decades. It is pretty debatable whether the development of the Internet
helps students to learn more effectively or not. However, I strongly believe
that it is truly conducive to students for the following reasons.
To
begin with, students can use powerful search engine, so they can find what they
need for their learning through searching information on the Internet. The
database within the Internet is extensive and students can utilize it for free.
For example, when students study thermodynamics in a university, they require
physical, chemical and thermodynamic properties of materials. They can find
information just by typing what they want to find on a search bar. The
elementary information about some materials such as water and ethanol is
well-established in several sites, so they can use some data for their
calculation or simulation. On the other hand, before the development of the
Internet, students had to go to library to find the information. Even worse,
some data were not for free, so they had to pay their money for their study. In
this regard, I think students can take advantage from the Internet.
On
top of that, students also can learn beyond the area of what they learn from
school thanks to the Internet. A vast number of free lectures, free notes or
presentation files are available on the Internet, so students can widen their
knowledge easily. When I was a freshman, I wanted to study more about modern
physics, especially about the cosmology. However, I could not learn about it in
my university because I majored in chemical engineering. Thus, I found some
lectures on YouTube about what the time is and how the universe is created.
Furthermore, I searched the perspective of modern scientists about the Big bang
theory. Those information was truly helpful, so I was able to solve my
questions and widen my knowledge. However, it was also difficult for the
students who could not use the Internet because they had to go library or buy
some books. In this context, students can learn what they want to do more effectively
thanks to the Internet.
To
sum up, not only can students find a lot of information on the Internet for
their study, but also they can widen their knowledge thanks to it. Therefore,
students can learn more effectively with the help of the Internet.
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