Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? university athletic department should receive the same amount of funding as university libraries. |
(생각나는대로 적어봤어요;; 제일 흔한 유형;;)There are ongoing debate wheter university athletic department should get the amount of money as much as university libraries get. Some people argues that libraries play more cruicial role than athletic department, and thus they have to be paid more. However, I agree with-> with the opinion that university (insert)athletic department should receive the same amount of money as university libraries received for the following reason. Above all, Sports activities are very important as much as students’ study. (First of all,) That’s because sports activities good for both students’ physical health and mental health. Regular Exercise can cure disease such as diabetes, cancer and obesity. For example, my sister who suffered from obesity works out regularly as her doctor suggested. As a result, she lost weight and she doesn’t get a stress from fat anymore. It also cured her mental problem which had stress about her figure. When it comes to mental health, students can release stress from study through the sports activities. Second, university sports activities make students (to) learn social skills such as cooperation, responsibility and leadership. For example, football activity requires team cooperation to win and each student’s responsibility. All students who participated in soccer game have responsibility to lead a ball to goal. They have to concentrate on their tasks because that activity is group work. Through this activity, Students can learn various kinds of social skills they need in the future. To summarize, I definitely believe that university should give the same amount of funds to students’ sports activities. 논점은 high school이 아니라 university입니다. 대학에서는 체육이 의무가 아니라 선택사항인데… support내용들은 모두high school에 맞는 것 같네요.. 대학교 athletic 이면 연세대 아이스하키팀, 고려대 농구팀, 00대 야구팀 머 이런거 말하는 것 같아요;; 단어개수 195개로 너무 적습니다. Minimum이 300words 입니다. 간혹가다가 글자수로 오해하시는 분들도 계시는데 words수입니다!! 더 늘리세요~~ 파이팅^^ |