■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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▶ Topic : In order to be well-informed, a person must get information from many different news sources. | |
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▶ Your Answer :
It is often said that we need various news sources to be well-informed. Some people may be opposed to this statement because we can be sensible person by only one kind of news source such as newspaper. However, in my opinion, we should have many different kinds of news materials. There are a number of reasons why I feel this way, but to make matters simple, I will shorten my discussion to two arguments. One is that we can reduce our prejudice about something and the other is that we can get diverse knowledge from them.
To begin with, most people already have their opipnions about someone or something and it is hard to change to their mind toward them. However if people contact different kinds of news source, they will be able to open their idea. One of the best example is my best friend Tom. He used to regard the War in Iraq as a unfortune for iraq people for several reasons. He started reading about the War because he was interested in the war. After he contacted diverse reading materials such as newspaper, magazines and TV programs, he changed his mind since he got to know that Iraq people underwent hard time due to their ex-president and the War made him leave the country.
In addition, people can get diverse knowledge from a number of sources. It is obvious that most people tend to be interested in narrow and specific fields. For exmaple, I was fond of sports but not of arts before However, last year my father gave me some art magazines which became my precious tresure since then. I didn’t know anything about arts because I just played soccer when I had a chance to spend my time on enjoying my hobby. After I read the art magazines, I became a person who has knowledge about fine art especially impressive paintings.
All things considered, I think people need many different kinds of news maerials. Not only can we reduce our prejudice but also we can get various knowledge from them. The importance of these benefits cannot be underestimated to survive in modern society.
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