■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer |
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▶ Topic : HACKERS ACTUAL TEST 10
Students should not be exposed to teachers' opinions on social and political issues in class. | |
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▶ Your Answer :
It
is a debatable issue whether students should not be exposed to teacher’s
opinions on social and political issues in class. As far as I am concerned, I
believe that it is desirable for students to know the social and political perspective
of their teachers. This can raise the awareness of social problems and
encourage active social atmosphere among the students.
To
begin with, exposing teacher’s opinions on social and political issues can be a
stimulus for students to realize that they are not attentive to the issues enough.
These days, there are numerous entertaining sources available to the students,
such as YouTube, Netflix, etc. Owing to these materials, students tend to pay
little attention to social issues gradually. Therefore, it is often necessary for
teachers to properly show personal perspective on several issues to students in
order to induce their social and political attention. For instance, I have taught
some students as a personal tutor for three years. During the course, I have often
mentioned my opinions on the social issues to my students. According to their
response, this motivates them to have more attention to social and political issues.
Otherwise, they wouldn’t have much attention while concentrating on other
entertaining sources.
On
top of that, the active atmosphere among students can be developed when
teachers mention their opinions on social issues. To be specific, letting
students know teachers’ opinions on the issues can not only help them cultivate
their own critical viewpoint actively. As for my experience, I and my friend once
attended a separate sociology class in our university. My class had often a debating
atmosphere due to the professor’s frequent mention of several issues, while his
class didn’t as his professor only committed himself to the course. At the end
of the semester, I found that my class had more improved ratings on individual social
participation, such as participating in several social movements, than the other
class. Moreover, students in my class often said that the active atmosphere of
debate in the course motivated them to have more consideration on the social
issues and lead to further participation.
In
conclusion, exposing teacher’s opinions can encourage the students’ attention to
social issues and active social environment among them which can lead to further
movement. In this regard, I hold that it is okay that teachers express their views
on social and political issues in their class. |
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