▶ Your Answer :
People
in the modern society communicate with a lot of people in daily life. In the
conversation, people do not always tell the truth due to their circumstances.
Some people believe it is not a good attitude. However, in my opinion, there
are special cases where which are it is better not to tell the truth. There are two main circumstances
which I will explore in the following essay.
To
begin with, when you talk to people in a good purpose, it may turn out into a
positive result even though its content is false. Generally, these positive
results make other people happy in their life, and they might feel grateful for you me. If so, I you would be excited as well because your my words had made them delighted. delightful. There is a popular research which is called ‘placebo effect.’ It
was about the mental experiment of patients. The pPatients received a medicine which could can cure their every disease, and it has been is proven by their main doctor. In fact, the these medicines had totally no effect on their ailment. However, the patients in the hospital
desperately believed that the medicine would make them completely healed from
illness. Surprisingly, after a few months of false treatment, majority of the
patients became healthy, due to their strong belief in the mind. In the
process, the doctor obviously lied to patients regarding the false medicine.
However, it turned out as a greatly happy result. As seen on this research, false
indications sometimes help people. 다른 사람을 기분 좋게 하기 위해 거짓말을 할 수 있다는 주장과 위약을 통해 심리적인 힘으로 긍정적인 결과를 이끌어낸 것은 논점이 다릅니다. 사례 내용은 기분 좋게 하기 위한 거짓말이 아니라 믿음이나 심리상태가 실제로 물리적인 영향을 가져올 수 있는지에 대한 실험이므로 '내가 거짓말을 함으로써 상대방의 기분을 좋게 만들 수 있으므로 늘 진실만 말할 필요는 없다'라는 주장과는 맞지 않습니다.
On
top of that, some truths in the world must be kept as a secret, especially in
the case of serious promise between people. To be specific, it is important
because trust in the friendship is one of the most valuable assets in the life.
Generally, if distrust began to arise between friends, it is hard to reverse
their relationship as before. For example, when I was in high school, I had have a
friend who loved to play soccer. However, his parents really hated his playing
soccer because he once broke his ankle severely during the a soccer match. His
parents always asked me about my friend`s behavior, and whether he played
soccer at school. To keep the relationship with my friend, I always said that my
friend had no interest in the soccer anymore. Due to the false words I had said
in the past, me I and my friend are still best friends which persisted for about
20 years.
In
conclusion, sometimes it is important to lie in order to achieve happy ending.
This is due to the fact that good purposes makes the positive outcome positive, and also
keeping words is essential between reliable relations.
Comment : 다른 사람의 기분을 상하지 않게 하기 위해 진실을 말하지 않거나, 신뢰를 유지하기 위해 진실을 말하지 않는 경우 모두 주제에 잘 부합하는 내용입니다. 다만 설명과 사례 내용의 맥락이 맞지 않는 부분은 수정이 필요하겠습니다. 과거 내용 시제일치 부분도 유의해주세요~ 수고 많으셨습니다~!
Independent Writing Rubrics Score 3/5 An essay at this level is marked by one or more of the following : - Addresses the topic and task using somewhat developed explanations, exemplifications and/or details (일정 수준의 설명과 예시를 활용하여 문제의 요구사항을 해결함) - Displays unity, progression and coherence, though connection of ideas may be occasionally obscured (문맥이 모호한 부분들이 있을 수 있으나 통일성, 연속성, 일관성이 어느 정도 드러남) - May demonstrate inconsistent facility in sentence formation and word choice that may result in lack of clarity and occasionally obscure meaning (문장의 구성 또는 어휘의 선택에서 내용의 명확성이 떨어지거나 의미 전달이 불분명한 부분들이 있음) - May display accurate but limited range of syntactic structures and vocabulary (답안의 내용은 주제에 부합하지만 제한된 문장구조나 어휘를 사용함) |