Hard work has more to do with success than luck does |
Some people often believe that luck brings them to be successful. However, I think effort has more to do with success because working hard consistantly helps people to improve. Also, a luck does not come to someone who is doing nothing.
First of all, put an endeavor without giving up will aid people to develop their weakness. When people try hard to acheive or fix something though consistency, it will bring a reasonable result with a success. In my experience, even though I attend to International School for more than four years, my English, as a subject, I could never get A in this subject. As I attempted to read English novels as much as possible, my reading skills became better as writing essay skills improved. Eventually, I could get A, and I received outstanding achievement award for my hard works. By keep working hard, it will bring a good result as it render people to become successful.
Furthermore, no body knows when the luck would come to them in the right place at the right time. A person who never put any effort will never take a chance to succeed. However, the person, who always work hard as they are prepared for any risk taking, will have oppotunities regardless of difficult situation. For example, one of korean, who entered Princeton University, had difficult circumstances, so it was hard for his parents to afford him to enter university in the United States. As he became one of the top students in his school with efforts, scholarship was given to him due to his high level of education. Therefore, there is several ways to become successful if he or she works hard.
In conclusion, efforts makes people to improve at any difficult task, and they bring opportunities to be successful. I firmly think hard work render people to become success rather than luck does. Rather than believeing the luck would come sometimes, people ought to challenge themselves for the sucess. |
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