Which is more important for success : the natural ability you are born with or hard work? Explain your opinion, using specific reasons and examples. |
Generally, some people say that the natural ability is more important than hard work for success. The others say that it would not be true. Considering this reason, if we work hard, we would get success. I believe that hard work is very important and then success will be followed.
Firstly, not every successful people has the natural ability. When I was a junior in high school, there were two of my friends. The one was very clever and his IQ was one hundred thirty. The other friend did not have that kind of capability. However, the other friend won a clever friend at all exams of semester. In addition, if innate ability is the most important, nobody would work hard. Today, because every people are working very hard, our society has been tremendous developed. Taking this consideration above, I think that natural abilities are not that much important. Of course, if someone has inborn ability, it would be good. However, natural ability is not all. Something more important must be hard work. There are many successful people in our world but not all of them have natural ability. We would keep in mind that.
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