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That It is an undisputable fact that the world is getting smaller and more sophisticated is an undisputable fact. The biggest contributor is, without a doubt, the advent of science and technology. Therefore, contemporary people have more interactions with others in the society 1. that is becoming more and more specialized. People who previously had general knowledge about his field and its related areas now only concentrate on honing his major. Thus, I agree that nowadays it is more important to know how to work together with others than it was in the past. The rationale behind this is followings. First of all, the society is divided into many specialized areas that people should cooperate with each other in order to make an achievement. In addition, many business and companies requires personnel who can bring fruitful result (while) working with their fellow co-workers.
1. 이 문장에서 말하는 that 이 무엇인가요? Society를 말하는 것이라면 society, which becomes more specialized라고 써주면 좋겠습니다. 또 무엇에 specialized 된다는 것인지도 밝혀주면 좋겠네요.
To begin with, modern society is subdivided into millions of variegated and complex fields than it was did in the traditional society. People who work in scientific areas dig more complex science in the areas of more complex science and people whose job is to farm continues to contemplate about producing more crop. In other words, they do not interfere with other areas that are related to their occupation, such as practical application of science theories or transportation of crop. It's not their job to do so. Instead, there is are other people who supervise these fields of areas, such as technicians and transporters. Since these jobs are inter-related and inseparable as to reach one’s goal produce accomplishment, it is inevitable that they work together. Consider the advent of nuclear energy. In order to produce nuclear energy, scientists work to prove their hypothesis and find out method to produce energy by making isotopes collides. Meanwhile, technicians work together to produce a nuclear power plant that is safe enough not to leak radiation so that radiation does not leak. Without them working together, the nuclear energy could would never have never been put into a practical use.
Furthermore, companies require people who know how to work together and produce best results by working together. They try to apply the rule that 'two brains are better than one'. Many companies put people into several groups and ask them to accomplish a certain task. For example, let's say that people in a marketing area were required to produce a cosmetic advertisement. One person should conduct a market research to know who might be the target (audience); another one (individual) should think of the theme and catchy phrases; the other different person should know the computer technology to edit produce images, and it goes on and on. Teamwork has never been more emphasized than today in the world today, as companies strive are striving to increase efficiency, proficiency and (high) production.
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