People should carefully plan activities for their free time. |
People usually like to spend their free time without planning because they think it is no necessary. However, I believe that they ought to make a scheme attentively for what activities they are going to do in their free time because they may use time wisely as they enjoy it. Also, planning helps people to organize what is needed for certain activities.
First of all, planning carefully makes people to spend their time wisely and gives much enjoyment. When they do not plan what to do, it reduces their free time as they decide and hesitate what to do. It is a waste of their precious time. In my experience, we did not think about what activities we would do before we hang around, so there was an argument about it in the middle of street. Unfortunately, we used 30 minutes for deciding what to do, and we became frustrate about it. As a result, we chose to go home even though it was too early to go back. Without scheming activities, people lessen their enjoyment while they utilize time recklessly.
Making a schedule helps people to consider about what is necessary. People often forget about what they ought to bring for activities and easily regret in the future. To prevent this, they need to carefully plan what to do and think about what they need. For instance, my family went a vacation to beach a few years ago. As we schemed out what to do before we go, we made a hotel reservation and prepared to bring what is needed for swimming, such as sunscreams, swimming suits, and water glasses. Planning aided us to not miss anything. Thus, we did not have any problems and spent one of the best vacation without anxiety.
In conclusion, scheming carefully for the free time bestows various advantages of using time wisely and well preparing for activities. I strongly think people should always plan for their free time. Having a habbit of planning will help people to enjoy their time much better.
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시간재서 쓰는 에세이 싫어요.
제가 너무 느려서 빨리 빨리 못쓰거든요.-_-;; (뭘 써야할지 고민함..)
에세이 써본지 몇년이 됬는데 아직도 시간 재고 쓰면 당황해서
엉망이 되네요... 이번꺼 당연히 30분 넘게 썼고요.
앞으로 연습하면서 꼭 시간안에 완벽한(?) 에세이를 써가도록 할게요;;
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