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As society has changed, desire of job is also changed. Many people want to have a job that is well-suited and secure to them. Therefore, many people try to get a good job. Some people said that it is better to wait for a satisfying job than take a job that people can work right away. However, I think that to wait for their for a long time to get a job is waste a of time because they can lose their opportunity to have a various experiences. I will present two reasons for to support my opinion.
Firstly, any one can’t predict their future, so waiting for their to get a satisfying job might be a waste of time to for them. This is because, people would not get a job for their living, if they just waited their job rather than taking present job that people can work right away=it is hard for people to find a better job even though they wait for vacancy, and if they don't take current opening they won't be able to work for long time. One example is my sister. When she was graduating student senior in University looking for a job, she could get was able to find a job which that she can work right after her graduating graduation. However, she gave up on that job because it could not make her satisfied. Finally, my sister could not get a job during 2 year However, she could not able to find a job that she wants for more than 2 years. By this, I think that to take a present job current opening jobs regardless of one's aptitude is better because it gives various experiences. Also, it would give a job security to people, if it were an opportunity for a secure job Also, it would offer stable life to people by the secure job. Therefore, just waiting for a one’s satisfying job is not a good idea.
*일자리를 오래 기달려서 찾는것보단 바로 열린자리로 들어가는게 낫다고 하셨습니다. 그 이유로 1) 시간낭비 2)안전성을 언급하셨는데, 딱히 안정성이랑은 연관이 없어보입니다.
In addition, people can improve their various careers by finding other satisfying job and changing their job. This is because, to have various job fields is good for their skills when they are being facing difficult situation in their work. According to a survey, conducted by a research team of Tokyo University, more than sixty five percent of businessmen answered that they can change their job when they have an opportunity to have a satisfying job. It shows that people do not need to wait for their satisfying job for a long time, because, people can change their job field when they find satisfying job while they are working another kind of job, and these experiences become helpful to their other job. Therefore, to take a job which can work right away is good to both their job experience and their living.
*주장과 상관이 없어보입니다. 해석하자면, [사람들은 만족시키는 일을 찾고 바꾸면서 다양한 경력을 쌓을수있다]이 문장 자체로는 주장과는 상관없는 이유가 됩니다. 따라서 [people can still look for satisfying job while they work.]라 바꿔주시는게 더 나을것같습니다.
As a result, some people think that waiting for a satisfying job is better, although they can have a chance for of a secure job because that job it can’t make them satisfy satisfied. However, I believe that people can improve their careers and keep their living by taking job right away from current openings in companies, and people can change their job after while when find their satisfying job. Therefore, if I have opportunity for a secure job, it is better to take it right away than to wait for my satisfying job.
**전체적으로 waiting for satisfying job이라 쓰셨습니다. 하지만 looking for satisfying job이라 바꾸심이 더 나을 듯 합니다.
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