You have the opportunity to visit a foreign country for two weeks. Which country would you like to visit ? Use speficic reasons and details to explain your choice. |
There are lots of countries that might be nice to visit, such as France, where I can see the Eiffel tower, and Egypt, where the pyramid is. But if I have the opportunity to visit a foreign country for two weeks, I would go to Brazil because I hoped to see Brazillian kids playing soccer on the streets from a long time ago, and wanted to go to the city, Riodejaneiro, for it's beautiful beaches.
When I first read an article about Brazillian youngsters playing soccer on the streets, I was surprised because previously I thought they might take soccer lessons professionally due to Brazil's FIFA ranking, which is the Number one. But actually, most of the star players from Brazil such as Ronaldo and Kaka played soccer like that when they were kids. So I want to go to brazil beacuse I want to watch brazillian kids playing soccer on the streets.
When I was younger, one day, I saw my friend's jacket with a picture of one beautiful beach in Riodejaneiro, on it's back. The picture was so pretty that I tried to find more images of Riodejaneiro's beaches by internet when I returned home that day. So it would be great to go to Brazil and view the spectacular beaches in Riodejaneiro with my own eyes.
To sum up, I would travel to Brazil if I have the chance to stay there for two weeks, to watch young guys playing soccer on the streets that I have read about from some newspapers and to see the fantastic beaches of Riodejaneiro which I imagined for a long time since I saw it's picture on my friend's jacket.
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