Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? With the help of the Internet, studies can learn more effectively. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. |
In the past, information was a valuable commodity and was difficult to obtain for those without money. The advent of digital technology has given everyone access to a wealth of information on the web cheaply and conveniently. However, nowadays the internet has become problematic for few reasons. First of all, there is too much information on the web which is not necessary. Millions and billions of information appear when people access the internet. However, only one percent out of them is useful. There rests are unworthy. Moreover, even that one percent of information cannot be trusted. For instant, when I was a freshman in university, I had to write a term paper for my biology class. However, since I had troubles with my financial problem at that time, I hardly had chances get along with my studies. And because I didn’t study a lot, I needed to find some information for paper. Thus I accessed on the internet to get some information about the topic. Soon, I was able to find huge amount of information, and I wrote the report based on the information. However, my professor gave me an F for it, because some of the facts written in the paper were not true at all. Moreover, there are online courses for those who are unable to attend on campus classes. IT may be convenient because it allows students to do home-schooling. However, this is a waste of time. Because it isn’t face-to-face communication, it has little feedbacks than the on campus classes. Also, its low quality, caused from the fact that it is hard for tutors take care of their pupils, worsen the internet classes and thus users get disappointed very easily. Also, according to Jung Ahang Daily Research Department, two thirds of the online course pupils said that they got disrupted by surround things because professors are not actually in front of them. To Sum up, It is evident that he introduction of the internet ushered humanity into a new age of technology. However, I object to the statement that web helps students to learn more effectively, since the information on the internet are unorganized and untrustworthy. In addition, online education system in fact does not help people that much. |
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