Human activities have enhanced and improved the Earth |
These days, a growing number of people believe that human activities have brought positive effect to the Earth. However, contrary to the opinion, I strongly believe that human activities have extremely damaged the Earth’s condition. The rationale behind this is that human beings make severe environmental destruction. Furthermore, ecosystem has been deadly affected by human activities. First of all, human activities play a pivotal role in bringing about lethal environmental destruction. This is because a variety of human activities such as construction new buildings, modification land for economic purposes, and last but not least develop natural resources have noxious influence on the Earth’s environment. For instance, when I was a little kid, new department store was built in my hometown, which mostly consists of serene and tranquil green space. As a new construction was preceded, many of trees had to be removed. As a result, not until new department store was finished, do my neighbors have had to suffer from noise pollution from a considerable numbers of cars and shoppers as well as auto emissions. Moreover, human activities contribute to significantly destroying the ecosystem of the Earth. An important reason is that human intervention situates the ecosystem in danger directly or indirectly. Therefore, some human activities cause a wide variety of animals to be endangered. For example, some farmers brought bullfrogs into their farm in Korea in order to get rid of noisome insects without insecticide which can provoke deadly diseases. Unlike farmers’ thoughts, it caused unexpected result; many of animals including grasshopper, beetles, and even snakes disappeared from their farms. Such bullfrogs have been an unsolved problem in Korean ecosystem. In conclusion, with unswerving conviction, I firmly support the statement that human activities have had negative impacts on the Earth. The reason is that various human activities cause environmental destruction. What is more, human intervention results in severe destroying of the ecosystem. All in all, mankind should find a way to live together with the Earth sooner. |
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