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I believe that spending time with family is more important than spending in working because family must be the most valuable thing in my life. It is of course important to work for a living but family always comes first to me. The first reason is that the result of sharing time with family is much bigger than that of working. After sharing time with family, good memory and great happiness come to my heart and we can cherish it for the whole life. However, most time we are rewarded by salary after spending time with working. It is needless to say that happiness and satisfaction in mind is much more important than making a good money. For example, if I had to work during Thanks Giving day instead of participating in family party, I would be able to earn extra money but I would lose a great opportunity to taste my sister’s first pumpkin cake and I would not be in the family picture. It will be regrettable for me after 5 years have passed. On the other hand, family cannot be substituted by anything whereas the work can change. For everyone, only one family member exists. There is only one mother, husband and little sister. However, we can choose a job if we do not like it. If a job required me to consecrate too much time, I can find another job which would fit me better. In a real example, in my parents’ generation, fathers spent a lot of time in working so it was mothers’ jot to take care of children. Although fathers worked hard not only for himself but for other family members, children do not understand their fathers who did not show attention when they need more attention from their fathers. In consequence, children resent against their fathers and fathers became lonely in the family. Therefore, the value of family must be the priority for me at any time. In conclusion, it is more important to share time with my family than spending a lot of time in working. Family is the most meaningful value for me which cannot be substituted by anything, and we can have the satisfaction of good memory with family if I spend more time with them. |