■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic : teachers should get paied at least as much as lawyers, doctors, and CEOs. | |
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There are many kinds of prestigious jobs and teacher is one of them including surgeons and lawyers. However, despite the fact that all of their works require expertise and hard work, teachers earn far less money than other people do. From my point of view, teachers deserve equal amount money because they affect other people's lives greatly. Also, teaching others is very stressful work.
To start with, an educator can play an enormous role in one's life. Since teacher's role is not just giving knowledge but also includes finding right career path and forming personality, individuals can live successful lives depending on which teacher they meet. To illustrate, Helen Keller, who was born blind, deft, and mute and had hard time learning things, could build a great personality after all, thanks to her great teacher. As well, a well known korean figure skater Yun-ah Kim could successfuly find and pursue her career path because her coach noticed her ability and encouraged her.
Furthermore, teachers are under great stress since teaching is not an easy task. As teachers usually have to deal with students whose age is not old enough to be mature, they spend almost all of their time scolding them. Even more, imparting knowledge requires great teaching skills that can only be obtained through many year's experiences. Thus, teachers should go through a great deal of hard works every day struggling with children. As an illustration, according to a research, there are many teachers who actually consider quitting their jobs because of hard works and stresses that they have to always bear and this clearly shows that how much it is difficult job.
In closing, I strongly believe that teachers should be paied as well as other professional jobs because their role is no less important as far as their influence on other's life is concerned, and their work is quite stressful. All things considered, a good pedagogue deserves his or her true values. | |
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