15. Neighbors are the people who live near us. In your opinion, what are the qualities of a good neighbor? Use specific details and examples in your opinion.
Neighbor are the people who live near us. In this essay, I will describe that what are the qualities of a good neighbor because of several reasons with specific reasons and examples.
Firstly, I think that good neighbor qualities are not making noise, because of too near locating. As a rule, modern people live in apartment which located too near, straight side, that one building have a many houses, separting district shape. For example, I live in apartment, which have many neighbors, straight side. My neighbor would sometimes sing a song, who major in music, but I am a highschool student, I must to concentrate on my subjects, to enter the good university. If my neighbor sing a song for his exercise, I can not be studying, really. Therefore, I would think that good neighbor qualities are not making noise in my case.
Secondly. I think that good neighbor qualities are keep privacy, because of because of too near locating. Korean people would think that individual privacy must keep absolutely, that is the old custom, it is keep for individual privacy, in korea, making many law. This is korea real life. As I live in apartment, I always think that I have to keep my neighbor privacy. If I overhear them, they feel the bad feeling, happen to feud, make me isolate with many neighbors. If I keep the privacy, we will sustain good relationship, help the each other for hardship time, have many benefits. Therefore, I would think that good neighbor qualities are that keep a privacy in my case.
In conclusion, I describe that good neighbor qualities is that first not making noise, second keep privacy, because of too close located.
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