▶ Your Answer :
The writer argues that there are several
reasons to assume the story explaining how Greeks used mirrors to burn the
enemy was fiction. On the other hand, the lecturer cast doubt on the writer’s
argument.
First, in the lecture, the document that illustrated
curved mirror was lost because of some reasons. Also the first document that
mentioned the curved mirrors was prior to the war that Greeks used this method.
This challenged the writer’s claim that curved mirror had not been made before
the war and there are no evidence to explain the existence of this mirror.
Second, according to the lecture, because armies
were trained highly, so they could aim the enemy properly. Because they had a
skill to focus on same spot, the method used in the war was feasible. This
counters the author’s assertion that it was impossible to coordinate with other
individual and they just experienced confusion during the war.
Finally, the speaker argues that any small
fire could spread so quickly that Romans could not extinguish the fire. For the
reason that the ship was composed of material which can’t resist to fire, it is
reasonable to think this strategy was effective. This is in direct opposite to
the reading passage that small fire could be easily extinguished and this fact
is proved by recent studies.
점수: 22 리딩에 대한 정보가 많이 부족한 통합형 에세이입니다. 통합형 에세이에서 가장 중요한 부분을 차지하는 것은 한 주제에 대하여서 서로 다른 정보를 가지고 있는 리딩과 리스닝이 어떻게 비교하고 반박을 하는 것인지를 보는 것 입니다. 지금 이 에세이 같은 경우에 있어서는 리딩에 대한 부분이 한 문장으로 서술하였는데. 한 문장으로 끝나는 것 보다는 리스닝을 좀 더 반박할 수 있는 부분들을 더 서술해주시길 바랍니다. 수고많으셧습니다.
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