■ Direction You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. Your response will be judged on the basis of The quality of writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and the relationship to the reading passage. Typically, an effective response will be 150 to 225 words.
■ Question Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on the points made in the reading
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The lecturer argues that the hammerhead sharks have unusually shaped heads and they are not helpful for them to survive and there is no obvious advantages for the shark. This contradicts the reading passage's claim that the unique appearance of its head must have some specific evolutionary merits.
First, the lecturer asserts that unique structure of the head allows sharks to see overall widely. However, the shark cannot distant prey and objects. Moreover, the major drawback is that they can not see the objects in front of them. Therefore, they cannot catch the prey in front of them. This casts doubt on the reading passage's claim that the unique structure of the head enhances vision.
Next, the lecturer claims that the shark's unique structure head does not help the shark's sense of smell. Typical sharks not hammerhead sharks have the same sense of smell ability as hammerhead sharks.To be specific, other sharks can catch the smell of one drop of blood in even Olympic swimming pool. (리딩에 대한 부분은 어디에 있나요?) This counters the reading passage's claim that the shark's head give it a better sense of smell than other sharks.
Finally, the lecturer insists that the hammerhead's unique head shape is not the main reason that the shark can turn quickly.To be specific, the main reason of the hammerhead shark's quickly turn is the little flexible hammerhead's backbone. And it makes the hammersharks turn quickly.This refutes that the reading passage's claim that the hammerhead's unique head shape allows the animal to turn quickly.
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리딩에 대한 정보가 많이 부족한 통합형 에세이입니다. 통합형 에세이에서 가장 중요한 부분을 차지하는 것은 한 주제에 대하여서 ㅅ로 다른 정보를 가지고 있는 리딩과 리스닝이 어떻게 비교하고 반박을 하는 것인지를 보는 것 입니다. 지금 이 에세이 같은 경우에 있어서는 리딩에 대한 부분이 한 문장으로만 각 단락에서 서술되어있습니다. 한 문장으로 끝내는 것 보다는 리스닝을 좀 더 반박할 수 있는 부분들을 더 서술하시길 바랍니다. 수고많으셨습니다.