First impressions tell a lot about people. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. |
Nowadays, lots of people including men, women, elders, and the youngs have cosmetic surgery. They put silicon in their nose and cut off the chin. Why do they fulfill the evitable surgery which is sometimes hazardous? It's usually because of their first impression. Like this, majority of people consider the first impression as the necessary and important part of the human. But I doubt the cast on this claim by reasoning several following details. First of all, the first impression could be misleaded often. There are a lot of people who does have kind and soft mind even though their face looks tough and cynical. Also, there are some people who looks so sinceritable. But sometimes those people betry the other's credit forward them. If there isn't a case like that, why did so a lot of people panicked because of the betrey of the relatives or friends dealing with security problems? It's one of the instance that made me to be sure of my opinion. Secondly, the first impression changes when the time lasts. I have experienced so a lot of those examples at the department of the new semester at school. The friends I met first looked so crooky and naughty. But along the time lasts, she looked more kind, kind, kind. Now I don't feel naughtiness or crooky any more. It's because that her impression changed. In conclusion, there are some instances of looking uncomfortable or annoyable because of their mind. It's usually because of their environment which they're dealing with. These people usually looks crooky but that's only our prejudice above first impression. So I recommend the removation of our stereotype above the first impression. |
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실력이 많이 부족해요..^^; 해커스 writing 책에 개재된 주제를 가지고 쓴 것인데, 첨삭 좀 해주시면 감사드릴게요!
어찌어찌하다보니 단락 하나(body)가 빠졌는데, 그래서 minimum300에도 차질 않네요 ㅜnㅜ
대략적 점수 생각해 주시면 정말 감사드릴께요! (쓰고 보니 공부 많이 해야겠다는 생각이..)