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What do you think is the ideal age to marry? why? Defining ideal age to marry seems to absurd. The time that person meet their ideal partner for their life can not be the same period. To force marriage time to someone I thought is careless behavior. It is one of most important decision for one's life to select their life partner. These important things can not be decided by other person or a social common idea. Appropriate age to marry is the time when you can independently make a decision your partner who has similar sense of value through all kinds of problem. That is, not biological age but mental age that is what I say about suitable marriage period. What are some of advantage of arranged marriages? What are some of the disadvantages? Arranged marriage can make someone swiftly know their partner. Generally speaking, Being aware a person precisely needs a lot of time. These day, most people are accustomed in fast pace through their life. There are also many available means of knowing your companion quickly and easily. Knowing your partner will keep you from misunderstanding your half. There are however risk of arranged marriage. Arranged marriage only can say to you material, tangible things your partner has. It will be a barrier to know someone's intangible trait. Do you think that arranged marriages are more or less likely to end in divorce? Why? One of the biggest reason to divorce is that someone have disappointed their partner. when they who did not well known each other, are married, their expectation is higher than couple who do. As their expectation were collapsed, they are increasingly less faithful each one. Distrust about desire between two have been growing in their relationship. Generally, Arranged marriage couples are more aware objectively than date-couples. Therefore they may expect concretely to each other. Realistic expectations are more easily accomplished. |