Travel with a companion VS Travel alone. |
Since people start to seek more joy of their life, traveling some other countries has become popular these days. Some might prefer to travel with a companion, others want to travel alone. In my case, if I had a chance to take a trip for days, I would join or find some other friends to go with because it’s always good to travel with others and for a safety reason. One of the reasons is that it would be more fun if I go with my friends and even great memories to share for the rest of my life. I would feel lonely easily especially in a place where they are not familiar with, that’s for sure not only for me but for everybody. However, with my friends, we can take a picture together, have whole day chatting about what we saw so far which I won’t be able to do alone. Another reason why I want to go with my friends is that traveling with a companion is much less dangerous than traveling alone. Apart from the joy of traveling and being with people who I like so much, security is the most important part of travel in abroad. In real, one of my friends was robbed her backpack including huge amount of money while she is traveling western All things considered that I have made above, it’s evident that it’s better to have a companion to travel with. Simply, it’s more fun, and safer. For those two reasons, I want to travel with a companion if I would take a trip for a few weeks. |
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