Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Young poeple enjoy life more than older people. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. |
In general, we easily think that young people can enjoy life more than older peole. I agree about that a little. But, where the "enjoying" comes from? My thought is fairly different.
They can do everything with their enough money. Generally, older people are have very much money which they have saved during their whole life time. They can do what they couldn't do cause of lack of money when youg. See Ji-sung Park, the best Korean soccer player. He is now getting piano lesson from so famous piano lessoner, which he couldn't learn cause of not enough money to be lessoned. Even in my case, I'll enjoy what I really want to do which I can't learn now cause of money. They can enjoy their life with their enough money doing they couldn't do for money.
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